Comments on: What’s Your Story? http://alexisrodrigo.com/whats-your-story/ Sat, 24 Jul 2010 13:12:10 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Akemi Gaines http://alexisrodrigo.com/whats-your-story/comment-page-1/#comment-156 Akemi Gaines Fri, 29 Jan 2010 18:14:41 +0000 http://alexisrodrigo.com/?p=716#comment-156 I'm the only person who did the homework? I thought about this quite a bit. My landing page has a story of my service. Do people really care about MY story? With your input that it's too long, and my idea that it's more important to focus on my service, I cut out the part about how I got started with my service. Now it looks more like a statement of intention rather than a story. What do you think ? I’m the only person who did the homework?

I thought about this quite a bit. My landing page has a story of my service. Do people really care about MY story?

With your input that it’s too long, and my idea that it’s more important to focus on my service, I cut out the part about how I got started with my service. Now it looks more like a statement of intention rather than a story.

What do you think ?

]]> By: Alexis http://alexisrodrigo.com/whats-your-story/comment-page-1/#comment-155 Alexis Fri, 29 Jan 2010 14:41:59 +0000 http://alexisrodrigo.com/?p=716#comment-155 Good work, Akemi! Congratulations on taking action! I find your story to be authentic and heartfelt. However, it's a little bit on the long side. You may want to condense it for easier reading. Which parts are essential for your readers? Hope this helps! Good work, Akemi! Congratulations on taking action!

I find your story to be authentic and heartfelt. However, it’s a little bit on the long side. You may want to condense it for easier reading. Which parts are essential for your readers?

Hope this helps!

]]> By: Akemi Gaines http://alexisrodrigo.com/whats-your-story/comment-page-1/#comment-151 Akemi Gaines Sat, 23 Jan 2010 01:25:55 +0000 http://alexisrodrigo.com/?p=716#comment-151 I like this post and did the homework of writing my story. I posted it in my About page on my sales site: <a href="http://www.akashicrecordreading.com/about/" rel="nofollow">http://www.akashicrecordreading.com/about/</a> My concern is 1) it may be too long (esp for press kit) 2) the part about how I started my business and my current relationship with my former teacher. I have to mention my teacher if I am to write about how I got started, but I'm not sure if the story about our consequent relationship is perceived positively. My plan this year is to get more publicity. I am writing a book now for this. If you could provide some feedback about my "story", I really appreciate it. Thank you. I like this post and did the homework of writing my story. I posted it in my About page on my sales site:
http://www.akashicrecordreading.com/about/

My concern is
1) it may be too long (esp for press kit)
2) the part about how I started my business and my current relationship with my former teacher. I have to mention my teacher if I am to write about how I got started, but I’m not sure if the story about our consequent relationship is perceived positively.

My plan this year is to get more publicity. I am writing a book now for this. If you could provide some feedback about my “story”, I really appreciate it. Thank you.

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